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ok so i really hate the way my story is going so i'm reverse it. make it FRESHH.


When we reached Maggie's house the lights were off in the whole house. It was pitch black outside. ''Is somebody home?'' TJ asked. Inodded and walked up to the front door. Maggie opened the door with this big smile on her face.'' Hello....welcome. I thought you'd never show. It's like 12:45 rite now. Where do you live like all the way over on Sheralk Lane?'' I winced at the name of my hood. I hated it that much. I looked over at TJ and he said,''Actually we do-,'' i cut him off before he could ruin my life,''Don't. We live like right out on Terry Street. With the big mansions and things. Yeah...it's nice over there. My house has like 6 bedrooms and 2 unfinished ones. You should come some time.'' I invited her because i knew she would say no because she would probably be embarrassed by her house. Which was not that much of a difference from what I described. I peeked over at TJ and he was staring holes through my face. I knew he was disappointed. I walked into the house but she made TJ leave because she couldn't have boys into her house. LIE, because she always talks about how she had Trey over and all that stuff. It was because he had on his work clothes. I had on my same little sundress from that morning. Ibet she thinksor THOUGHT we're poor. I'll prove her wrong.'' So go upstairs and join the other girls.'' I looked at her retardedl, like what is she doing? She said nothing about other girls. As if she was reading my mind she said,'' No girls from school. Just my sisters and my cousins.'' I walked through the house, lost, trying to find her room.Then I walked passed a room that had a pink door with glitter on it that read: MAGGILICIOUS. This has got to be her room. I opened the door and was shocked. I almost passed out. She had mirrors everywhere. A huge bed smack dabb in the middle and the wall had a painting of her face on it with her name in graffiti. She had a nice little soft looking sofa near the door. It was pink and sky blue. Her room was sos huge and colorful. It was paradise. I then noticed the people. I saw a girl with blonde weave,a heavy- set 20-somthing year old,a girl that had thick pink glasses and skinny jeans with a cute little puppy in her lap, a skinny dark skinned girl in a sundress similar to mine but she had hills on, and last a small little tiny 4 foot 11 girl standing near Maggie's bed arguing with the heavy-set 20 year old.''Mar-mar, no she didn't dude! I know her and she did not do something like that. And thats what's up!'' She rolled her eyes and plopped on the bed. The girl in the skinny jeans with the cute hot pink glasses and matching tee walked over to me. It seemed like she was the only girl who noticed me in the doorway.''Hi, my name is Pookie. I heard some stuff about you giiirrl. BUt anyway, have a seat. You can sit over there.'' She pointed to a lush hot pink chair. I walked over and sat down. Then all of a sudden a big tall skinny woman busted in the room and said,'' HUSH! Now that she is here, ya'll older girls better set some examples. Cut that foolishness out.'' She then turned to me. I had a look of fear in my eyes, i could tell. '' Hi sweetie, my name is Margaret. You may call me Marge. I'm Maggie's mother. Nice to finally meet you.'' I smiled, and she reached her hand out. I shook it and the door then busted open and Maggie pushed her mother out of the way.'' MOM!! SOME PEOPLE ARE OUTSIDE, THEY SAID THEY LOOKING FOR MONEE!! WHERE HE AT? HURRYYY!!!!'' She ran out the room and stomped down the stairs. I was kinda creeped out by all this dramatic stuff. First her room,then her family and mother and now this. What else? BOOM!!!! A gun went off. I sinked into my chair. This is supposed to be a nice neighborhood and a nice get together, not a gang meeting. It's nicer than my hood though. So im not complaining. Everybody left the room and stormed down the steps. I was the only one left so I walked to to the stair rail and peeked down. They were all standing in the living room and Maggie was outside in the street. She was yelling into the window of some car. I was definetly scared now. What is going on? I slowly walked down the stairs and sat on a sofa in the living room. I looked at the expression on everyones face. This is not good.